A man leaves behind his life of old, sets out on an adventure to find himself.
Wallflower82 Wallflower82 2 years ago
Woah. I didn't expect the ending, lol! This is pretty good. :) It was like listening to an old friend complaining about life. Just the way the character's personality was.
sageivans sageivans 2 years ago
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Pardon my French but... 

Goddamn this is fucking brilliant. 

I particularly like "chariots of the law". Mind if I steal that sometime? I might've fallen in love with the phrase. (I fall for words sometimes, so sue me)
NDMahshid NDMahshid 3 years ago
Good job
Though I wanted to read a bit more about the guy's frustrated life. Guess u could maneuver on it more
_cryptic _cryptic 4 years ago
@jamilla_  ... Agreed.. >.< I should be calling YOU a stalker then because im commented first and then allllll of a sudden.. you did to :o... OH! lol 
jamilla_ jamilla_ 4 years ago
okie...well then it's pretty random that i find you here...peanut butter to my Jam :)@misguided_angel 
_cryptic _cryptic 4 years ago
@jamilla_ Hello.. my jam to my peanutbutter..--- Ah! im not a stalker lol..