Beautifully Strange

Zane Torres a spoiled child, who get everything he wants when he wants. With two loving parents and on the football team as star quarterback. Zane even had the hot head cheerleader as his girlfriend. What more could he want? Payton Graves. The loner of the school abused by her Father she wears black and hides her bruises well. Works for everything nothing comes easy or free in her life. What happens when these two total opposites path in life collide and they are forced to interact with each other. Will something very beautifully strange happen?
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Very well written, I enjoyed it and how smooth it flowed. It kept me entranced with the story from paragraph to paragraph - well done.
Really good, it was cool and AWSOME amazing writting style, good details and no mistakes i could see frome what ive read!
I normally don't like long chapter's but if it's interesting I will read on forever...
You introduced the characters really good. Also, I normally give up at 2 pages, you got me reading for 4 which is good. Amazing job!
I really liked this as a beginning because it sets the scene and you are very descriptive, onto the next chapter ---->
Your synopsis sounds really interesting! Saw some errors, so you should proof read. Otherwise, great start!


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Beautifully Strange
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