Wow! Very good story so far, you really bring out the emotions, and you chose such a good conflict.
Her situation with her step father is soooo sad. :( but i really like your story. Kepp writing more!
Whats really sad is how much this actually happens in the real world :/ Abusive step fathers and all. :( Anyway! great writing!
No worries, I was only kidding anyway :) Good luck! (I promise this is really the last one haa)
Ew! that's gross, interesting story, but gross! Poor zoey :( Keep the story up tho!
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