I'm gonna read this later cos I'm short on time but IS THAT THE GIRL FROM STICK IT? HOTTIE ALERT!
Great job!! Awesome descriptions!!! I love this!! It's a fantastic piece of writing!! Voted!! =)
love the Mazzy Star vid you posted with your story...as you can tell by my avatar im a huge Hope Sandoval fan :)
Ops, I meant 'his' poor wife. Sorry if my comments are brief and have spelling mistakes, I'm on my phone, and it's really hard to type. >.<
Wow. Just wow. The ending line got my breath hitched in my throat, and I'm definitely going onto the next chapter. Amazing prologue.
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| Name | Kayla-Anne |
| Location | █♥█Canada█♥█ |
| Birthday | Feb 07 |
| Member Since | Aug 05, 2009 |
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