good first chapter, the explaination at the end was great, just as i was thinking 'why are roses freaking her out?' i found out why.
I read She, then I. o_o First person to third person. Instant change. Almost got confused. Lol.
I really love this story , I'm a total sucker for romance and fairy tales I read this in like 2hours
Great story so far (I'm reading this again) but your sentences all start with 'the' 'I' or 'when'.
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