Lots of spelling errors. I didnt see the point of describing every new character's hair color... it needs more work
I love it.. May I edit it.. or send in my corrections to improve the word usage!
I agree with slurpeeluvr and I love how your story is going so far keep writing :D
lool coooll check my story out too please n leave comments thnks! awesuuurrrrmmm storyy n garrett is a son of a something buh yhhh so is sierra
awesurrm yh i made da tym 2 read it n its so totally cool n dah so yeah! KEEP WRITING!!!
o and i wish i could spend nearly two grand in the mall<3 haha, that would be awesome...like this story :)
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