Sounds like this would be a great story. But I can't get past all the spelling and grammatical errors.
Cool :) Jason's cute! Haha, I love little kids. I like the foreshadowing in the last line!
I really like this :D And I never ever, and I really mean NEVER read this kind of stuff. So it is a big compliment DQ.
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