To be free again... ( Vampire story)
“Why can’t I remember anything? Is it possible for me to forget my hair colour, my eye colour, and my name? Am I young or am I old? How old am I? Do I have a family? Do I have friends? Are they missing me? Why am I so calm? And the most important question – why does this feel like a déjà vu?”
These are the questions that are running through mind of a girl who wakes up blindfolded in car without any memories of her past.
Soon she finds out that her kidnappers aren’t normal…
Will she be able to find about her past? Will she be able to stay sane? And most importantly -will she be able to stay alive?
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This is a GREAT beginning:D it's suspenseful and unique;) hope the rest is just as good:)
It is rambling on, like Mubler said. Also a few grammar mistakes. But both of those things can be easily fixed haha. Good job!
It is good but rambles on, just work on paragraph separation. But the premise is good so just try and work on that in the future and it'll turn out great.
very well written! normally not a huge fan of vampire stories (except for Twilight lol) but i'm impressed =) keep up the good work!
it is good you should continue please i am alway so interested in the different views on vampires and stuff :)
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