Very nice. The part about the lamppost being the way in and the way out made me shiver.
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sounds realy iinteresting but its like a book, a story more or less. I was expecting more ryming :P but I do find it interesting :)
Remarkable combination of imagery/stories. Such an interesting theme...truly enjoyable.
Excellent imagery with the juxtaposition of the sickness and the world on the other side of the wardrobe. Kudos!
I have a perfect memory of mother-fearing-chickenpox-blindness as well...this is so cool. your poetry is stunning.
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