Wow, great description. The beginning was very creepy, in a good way. It was like a classic horror story and made me want to read more. Voted.
This is excellent! Loving it so much already. Please post more soon I am dying to know what happens next! ^_^
Its great i loved it, i would say more but im speechless ! xD please keep posting
Awesome start! Thank you so so so so much for dedicating the chapter to me! :) Ahh poor Alyssa :L can't wait for the next chapter!
I loved the start. It was very eye-catching and compelling. And I love the last sentence! It was so dramatic. Keep writing, you're fantastic! :D
I love this story! I like your cover fine, by the way. I can't make one, I'm sorry :'(
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