Running Stream
A stream flowing through the mountain, waiting for its fall.
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ebonylight01
It's very short. And the stanzas made me feel a little bit confused? But I must say it was alright. :D
I really like ur poem it well written but I think u should add more it seems unfinished
Beautiful but you could have elaborated details and the story even more but I can sense simplicity in every word so great job :D
@YanoKiedis I did :) As soon as I get some time, I'll be happy to have another look =)
I had flashbacks too :) It is very nice poem.I love how with so little you do create so much
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