This is an awesome beginning. Your details are amazing and your dialogue is just so realistic.
Haha that was actually really refreshing to read. I like your characters. They seem real.
This is really good, i can see myself reading more on this :)) your're really talented :)) a few grammar errors , but still great :)
I really like this! It was comical indeed. It grabbed my attention and I'll be looking more! :D
haha this made me laugh... that would be strange if a man asked me to apply makeup to his facew :P Votd ^
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