Read most of them.. I love the word choice you used! You also captured a lot of emotion in each line of word. Very well put together! :)
Sometimes the rhyming scheme changes, breaking the flow of the poem, but otherwise it's really good love poem
You really really know how to touch some one, this got me right in the heart. You seem really mature and talented. *votes*
This poem is fantastic! If only I could write like this! You've got some deep understanding of love, girl!
Very interesting poem. I could feel the emotions shining through the words. Keep it up! You have talent.
WOW WOW WOW
im so jealous i wanna write as good as you do, damn it:P haha
keep up the good work;)
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