The prologue was very intriguing. Only a handful of mistakes, but they're an easy fix. (:
This was really good, it has me captivated to read more.! Def voted! and will keep reading!
OO, very intrequing x i cant spelll lol, but i would like to see what happens to the parents. Reading on, voted!
Beginning got my attention at the start. (: -Happy Dances- Mhm. . . Good Job! Libraray and Fan and VOTED!!!!
that's deep... ive got tears forming in my eyes i can just see the picture im fanning and adding you to my mobile libraryy :D
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