Hey! I love ur book, it's a lot like mine, the title really caught my eye, great job. Please check out my book, I think we have very similar tast in books :D
I really love your plot and descriptions, they are really vivid and they capture my attention effectively! Good job! :)
Oh and I forgot to add that your cover is amazing I love it so much so kudos on that ;) x.
Ooh, woot woot woot! Love this. :)) Losielette sounds like a very uncommon name and I could feel the tension in the 3rd page. Good detailing!
Very well sized chapter! :D I LOVE fantasy! :D Voted :) You have alot of vivid descriptions in your writing making it clear to the audience! :D Good wokr ^.^
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