Virgin taken on her maiden voyage

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Sinaidkincaid16 By Sinaidkincaid16 Completed
With his smoldering eyes caressing her, Riccardo Buchannan  arrogantly promised Kimberly, she would be his before the voyage was over....and he never breaks a promise
At first I. didn't see the word 'home' and was like wth is a cum studio?! x3
chat with somebody who did not know who I was. ❓  Or are allowing for an accent?
How can she not make the connection between Rick and Riccardo?
that would explain how he said I've never seen u here before,like he knew everyone on the ship
I'm sorry but the last name "Buchanan" reminds me of The Great Gatsby.
And I noticed that with each passing chapter, there were less and less reads, which means that I wasn't the only one who was appalled at this story. I'm really sorry if I'm being harsh. I just want to give constructive criticism.