The Art of Illusion

15 Part Story 3.9K Reads 241 Votes
Scriptor By Scriptor Updated 3 years ago
We all know that Disneyland is the happiest place on earth. And some of us know that the Matterhorn may have a basketball court at the highest part. But. You're. WRONG. So then what's up there?
Ya know Plan B reminds me of that song...you eve heard of it? Anyways, I still gotta keep reading!!! You're freakin' GOOD!!!
I LOVED THE PROLOGUE. i didn't notice any spelling mistakes. ummm...i guess that all.
                                    
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                                    the story was very engaging.
I could do with a little more description. I spotted an error, should have been "one o'clock" not "one'o clock" :D
Loads of action in the prologue! Great start! It's intriguing and makes, me, a reader, want more :D
This is very well done and original! It makes me have goosebumps! ^.^
@Scriptor :) wish I could be as good as you ......... Got any tips for me?