Ya know Plan B reminds me of that song...you eve heard of it? Anyways, I still gotta keep reading!!! You're freakin' GOOD!!!
I LOVED THE PROLOGUE. i didn't notice any spelling mistakes. ummm...i guess that all.
the story was very engaging.
I could do with a little more description. I spotted an error, should have been "one o'clock" not "one'o clock" :D
Loads of action in the prologue! Great start! It's intriguing and makes, me, a reader, want more :D
This is very well done and original! It makes me have goosebumps! ^.^
@Scriptor :) wish I could be as good as you ......... Got any tips for me?
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