I love the line "Truth is, love isn't dead, just asleep".
Thanks for reminding me that, such a wake up call. Really love this poem :)
Great job. The rhyme scheme was unsettling and that helped to attribute to the feelings behind the poem.
Was very touching. Sounds like she's saying goodbye to a love affair or to a loved one who passed away.
Wow.... Simple, yet strong and passionate words...... And to compose in a fixed poetry form ~.~
Mind to drop me a hint? =)
This is so beautiful... the love for love is always there in us... just needs time to open up again .. so true
@SissaRomanov never thought of "love is dead for him" before & thanks for the dedication. You put points of views in a new light
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