I think you did an Awsome job!I totally loved the book,lol!!!!Try capitalilizing your sentences.
I love diffrient pov btw it's so interesting figuring out how diff ppl think so good 4 you!!!!!
The mistakes r terrible u need to fix them and work on yur grammer but everything else is good the plot and characters, just the mistakes drive me crazy
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