He Stole My First Kiss -going through editing-

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proud2bme By proud2bme Updated 3 months ago

Want pure cliched romance? Here's one :))  (My first ever story, so it's pure cliched teen romance and it's going to be edited so excuse my very bad grammars) Written by: me Edited (still being edited) by: ashladee13
tryme1231 tryme1231 a month ago
Even if the stars and moon collide oh oh ooh I really don't care
Missdiva09 Missdiva09 a year ago
I think you did an Awsome job!I totally loved the book,lol!!!!Try capitalilizing your sentences.
sassiti sassiti 3 years ago
I love diffrient pov btw it's so interesting figuring out how diff ppl think so good 4 you!!!!!
Misguided-Angel Misguided-Angel 3 years ago
I like the story line, but there's too much talking and it's a bit rushed :))
gymnasticagurl gymnasticagurl 3 years ago
The mistakes r terrible u need to fix them and work on yur grammer but everything else is good the plot and characters, just the mistakes drive me crazy
caaake caaake 4 years ago
I have to say something...please correct your mistakes! They annoy me so much.