I think you did an Awsome job!I totally loved the book,lol!!!!Try capitalilizing your sentences.
Wow this is amazing! haha but I can kind of tell you haven't finished with the editing yet;) but nice story :)
hey if you want, I can edit this book for you! :D PM me, I'm going to read this whole book now, lol
I love diffrient pov btw it's so interesting figuring out how diff ppl think so good 4 you!!!!!
The mistakes r terrible u need to fix them and work on yur grammer but everything else is good the plot and characters, just the mistakes drive me crazy
are those real thats hilarious the 1st thing he says to her after their parents leave thats AWSOME
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