Please Be There (An Anorexic Girl Story)

19 Part Story 216K Reads 2.7K Votes
cheesehead By cheesehead Completed
Brenda's whole life she was teased for being fat. It even got to the point where her nickname was Brownie because when she was little she would quickly eat all of her Mom's brownies!! Eventually, Brenda decided to take matters into her own hands. Slowly Brenda become anorexic, but no one notices until she steps into Mrs. Colleen Rose's classroom. Brenda still tries to lose weight, but Mrs. Rose refuses to stand by and watch. A bond forms between the student and the teacher that might be able to get Brenda healthy again. But what happens if Brenda refuses to get better? And what if Mrs. Rose refuses to give up on getting Brenda healthier? Don't ask me, read for yourself:)
owner_of_the_TARDIS owner_of_the_TARDIS 10 months ago
I would love a teacher like that because they r less likely to call out on a student that has social anxiety ugh my teachers call on me all of the time
Love it so far:)) Poor Brenda.....Mrs. Rose seems cool though....a bit :/
dxyzee dxyzee 2 years ago
you wrote that they were in eighth grade... a senior in high school is in twelfth grade...

its at the part where mrs. rose is like "you may think that because you're in eighth grade.."
isa125 isa125 2 years ago
Wow, sad story, poor girl, anorexia is really bad... Happy ending though, really good story! :)
LetMeThink0 LetMeThink0 3 years ago
First chapter was great. I'm pretty excited about reading this book. Kind of suffering with something like this and i love reading books about it. Kind of gives me hope and makes me see i'm not alone. ANYWAY, bye.
Rivers Rivers 3 years ago
so love the story so far but i just want to know where are they from that 8th graders are the senior graduating class because i'd really like to go there lol :D keep up the great writing