This is really great work. I like it :). It's really great chapter, but also really sad. Continue writing :).
This is really good writing. There are a couple of small typos but it's late so I'll try to point them out later. Nice story and Good job.
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEPPPPPP!!!!!!!:D You uploaded!!!!! Yes I Am sooo reading it RIGHT now:) Thank you!!
This is amazing. You have so much emotion, and you describe it all too well. Great job.
aw, this is so sad. Poor Alice, but things are going to get better for her right . . . right?! Ah! I just have to go on and read the next part
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