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geumjandi By geumjandi Completed
Julian Sloan is the brother the famous business man Rafael Sloan[from my first story] his ambition is to be a teacher. He's a famous model in the whole country. Plus.. He's a player, he's never serious about her girlfriends. Until he met a girl name Rhoda Georgette Dena. A 17 year old teen age student of him. Her innocent face and the feminine scent of her driving him crazy!
hahaha. that's so embarrassing. i'd rather quit school at once.
omg I'd quit school. died from embarrassment. that poor girl
U need to spell check u have tons of errors and it makes reading and keeping on track kinda impossible, so please try and proof read.
I shut my eyes and started to skip to see what happened and return back
you need to slow down and rewrite this. good potential.. but i dont want to keep reading because its too grammacally incorrect and doesnt have a strong base. you sound like a twelve year old in this?
Its really embarrasing seeing george making herself out hahahaha