55 Part Story 517K Reads 5.4K Votes
geumjandi By geumjandi Updated 7 months ago
Julian Sloan is the brother the famous business man Rafael Sloan[from my first story] his ambition is to be a teacher. He's a famous model in the whole country. Plus.. He's a player, he's never serious about her girlfriends. Until he met a girl name Rhoda Georgette Dena. A 17 year old teen age student of him. Her innocent face and the feminine scent of her driving him crazy!
CairaAnis CairaAnis 19 days ago
I shut my eyes and started to skip to see what happened and return back
DeliciousPrincess DeliciousPrincess 4 months ago
you need to slow down and rewrite this. good potential.. but i dont want to keep reading because its too grammacally incorrect and doesnt have a strong base. you sound like a twelve year old in this?
JokjokGallardo JokjokGallardo 4 months ago
Its really embarrasing seeing george making herself out hahahaha
ghie250 ghie250 5 months ago
OMG!! I am gonna die of embarrassment if i were her..that was hilarious!!
JennySarah0 JennySarah0 2 years ago
Poor little girl... That was so embarresing... OMG
That was evil... :)
Curious_Kitten Curious_Kitten 3 years ago
ohh crapp I will stop reading from here... this is wayyyyy embarrassing ^_^