Forest Nightingales - The Forest Wants to Play

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NESMAN By NESMAN Updated a year ago
Lewis Nightingale is late coming out of work and so on the way home he makes a decision and brave the forest he has feared since he were a small boy. But a cruel spirit that lies in wait within the forests dark canopy is alured by the fears and hopes to feed on them by making his nightmares real in the reality it creates for its victims.
LiddySykes LiddySykes 3 years ago
I don't usually read this kinds of stories, but I have to say.. your writing is amazing. You describe everything so well, and I could really put my self in the character's shoes. *Voted*
phatkid phatkid 4 years ago
AMAZING. WONDERFUL. HORRIFYINGLY CREEPY.

My words to describe this story:)
I love it, keep writing dude-man!
LizzyLouLou LizzyLouLou 4 years ago
@NESMAN Sure. I'll message you some when I get home from work later. :)
LizzyLouLou LizzyLouLou 4 years ago
@NESMAN Don't use them both at the same time. Past - talking about things that have already happened; present - talking about things occuring now. 
LizzyLouLou LizzyLouLou 4 years ago
Creepy! :) Great job. I'd suggest sticking to one tense (instead of switching between present and past). 
karineprincess karineprincess 4 years ago
The writing is awesome and the story completely pulls you in. I'll definetly continue the read! Added to library and voted. xD