You're style of writing shows off your skills and you've got a really great way of keeping the reader entertained :)
I was completely trapped since the first paragraph. So enthralling and utterly nerve-racking! :)
:) I was scared of death, but drowning sounds the most peaceful way to go... just floating down into oblivin... :) awesome opening
You can't just stop writing this story like that! Its too intriguing for you to quit there... ^-^
Wow, this is a great prologue! I always suck at opening chapters but this is amazing. I'm trying to think who 'they' are.... I'm just going to keep reading!
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