I really love it.... Good story.... But it felt incomplete without the characters...
GUNK??? I like the combination but it sounds a little bit like something on the bottom of a shoe
this feels sweet. im pretty sure every person that has commented has said this already... but great description. i love this so much! i have no complaints (:
very good description but I a more into subtle self description where they look at themselves in the mirro and see their reflection or something like that.
Very interesting. The story immediately started with a good hook, and the story line is great! :D
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