This is really sad. It would be even more emotional for the reader if it had more detail. Good job though..I voted!!
could use a little tightening up (read through out loud), but it's a really good start. Nice story, and good job with emotion
Awwy! That was a beautiful love story! I'm happy Sam killed himself so him and Sally wouldn't be apart! :D Really good job!
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