ummm okay I did like it Haha but I mean you can always do better
Agreed! If the story was long starting with how the characters met and how there relationship was growing and what caused the fight!
Very nice story. Can i use some of the details in this story for my short film?
like Romeo & Juliet in the end XD
well without all the drama XD
This is really sad. It would be even more emotional for the reader if it had more detail. Good job though..I voted!!
this is so sad... Like Romeo & Juliet... Really nice story...
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