This is really sad. It would be even more emotional for the reader if it had more detail. Good job though..I voted!!
Agreed! If the story was long starting with how the characters met and how there relationship was growing and what caused the fight!
could use a little tightening up (read through out loud), but it's a really good start. Nice story, and good job with emotion
Awwy! That was a beautiful love story! I'm happy Sam killed himself so him and Sally wouldn't be apart! :D Really good job!
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