So far I'm liking it, is the gash thing an accent or spelling error? curious is all.
HMMM it's different. I like it so far i will continue to the next chatper though!!!!! I voted :D
as dext16 says, it's true that it looks common, but one can rarely judge at first glance, I'm keeping on reading to see how it goes.
Really good... not much to say about it, though. Add more details, sweetie. That's all.
It's very interesting. You can tell you worked hard on this book by the way the words flow nicely. And great foreshadowing by the way...
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