ur description was reely good and from the beginning to end you kept me on my toes of interest :) voting and nice job!
ok so you got my attention, omg i like this, and im liking your genre lolz but ill have to give you a *thumbs up* and *an add to the library*
I really liked this chapter :)
Your description was beautiful and overall you did a fantastic job in keeping the readers attention :)
I like it. It was a little slow at first bt the ending really wrapped it up for the next chapter. :Du
@Star_Lover27 - No problem. I know how its hard to get the descriptions right. got alot of feedback about them in my story. But this is really good
@NitaLeung I agree. It is a good story. Can I ask how did you come up with the idea? I like the writing style and the plot. I like how you describe everything.
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