Druids Over Sohon

Xavier, a 17 year old teen must face the daunting task of saving the human race from a druid overrun, using powers gifted to him unknowingly, he alone holds the secret to lead his people to salvation. For the race of mankind to continue, he must not fail them. Can one boy prevail in such dark hours?
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Not bad, not bad at all. You dialogue seemed natural, and flowed with the overall tone off the story. Your descriptions were on point. Voted...Great read.
WOW thats amazing. the description is so clear and the first paragraph just pulls you in. Excellent. Voted!
Great so far !! But yeah a tiny bit more description and dividing paragraphs better would top it off perfectly :) Voted
I like that it's descriptive, but probably you should divide the paragraphs instead of big blocks. But it's interesting and keep it up! :))
very descriptive!!! i love this storyline! a great way to end the chapter, nice cliffhanger!!!!!
Really nice description, it was pretty good, quite a few grammar errors here and there. Overall it was good :)


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