The Chase

1 Part Story 846 Reads 31 Votes
Mezmerised By Mezmerised Updated 2 years ago
The chase is on. Will she win the attention of the good looking man across the bar? What will she do if she does? Who is really chasing who?

Flash Fiction
Lil_Miss_Muffet Lil_Miss_Muffet a year ago
@Mezmerised i love your writing style, another short but great read, thanks for sharing :)
VictorBruneski VictorBruneski 2 years ago
Wow, that was really emotional, not to mention so well written.  I guess revenge is a dish best served cold.  Although I lved how she gave him a chance to seeif he learned his lesson.
StarPaine StarPaine 2 years ago
you are really very good at writing emotional short story!!!!
Catherineparady Catherineparady 2 years ago
Really lovely story - well crafted and no, I didn't see the ending.  Love the whole liquor theme from beginning to end.
bedda357 bedda357 2 years ago
A very well-crafted short story with beautiful descriptive passages.  Keeps the reader guessing.  Dark, compelling and emotive.  A great read, once again.
arthuritus arthuritus 2 years ago
I like the emotive juxtaposition within Nikki, beware an angry woman. You have an amazing empathy with and for people and this clearly shows. Love it.