The chase is on. Will she win the attention of the good looking man across the bar? What will she do if she does? Who is really chasing who?
@Mezmerised i love your writing style, another short but great read, thanks for sharing :)
Wow, that was really emotional, not to mention so well written. I guess revenge is a dish best served cold. Although I lved how she gave him a chance to seeif he learned his lesson.
you are really very good at writing emotional short story!!!!
Really lovely story - well crafted and no, I didn't see the ending. Love the whole liquor theme from beginning to end.
A very well-crafted short story with beautiful descriptive passages. Keeps the reader guessing. Dark, compelling and emotive. A great read, once again.
I like the emotive juxtaposition within Nikki, beware an angry woman. You have an amazing empathy with and for people and this clearly shows. Love it.