Ooh I love the going back part, I thought it was a real fight, oh well. I love the cover!
This was a great chapter! Plenty of well-written action kept it interesting and I really felt that Roxy was fighting for her life. Good job!
Very well written! Couldn't spot any major errors so thats great :) You descriptions rock and an original plot...cookie point! *voted*
Really nice start :) The characters get me interested in the story itself and I didn't stop reading till i was done
i like the mystery you have at the beginning of this, you don't know who or where she is, it made me defianatly read on x
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