hi the story is really good i just need to know when is your next update and the characters are awesome. the story really getting interesting.
I'd suggest less spacing between each paragraph, but other than that, really intriguing :)
LOL, Okay, this story is really clever. ;) I like your idea of the wristband;) AND CHACE CRAWFORD IS HOTT<3
The plot is extremely intriguing, sucking the reader into the book from the first chapter. SO AWESOME! :D Voted.
come on guys pay attention to the story.. he's not biting cuz he's a vampire.. thumbs up on this .. keep writing i like it :)
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