I really liked it. You start off with her happy and then boom disaster strikes although you don't know the full story yet..
I like the start and it seems popular! Just recommend you make it a bit longer! ;)
it's great start with a great description. the story is so awesome, and I already like it.
Nice story :) perhaps you can go a little more in-depth but it's pretty good all the same :D
this was REALLY good! awesome job! (sweet caroline- they play that song at the red sox games- lol)
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