First chapter, last paragraph i wanted to say that you can't feel a liquid going to your brain... Lol
Helmet is misspelled as hemet. Haven't read past that so I'll comment in the rest later.
How did you come up with this story line? Like seriously? It's unique and i love it!!
Read Day 1, and instantly added this my list of must reads...awesome concept, and great writing, can't wait to read the rest!
Love the idea! Really awesome book! Wish my story could be popular like that! Well looks like I'm headed to DOVE!!!
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