this was great i finished it in one day i was drawn there needs to be a sequel to this it will be amazing as well
First chapter, last paragraph i wanted to say that you can't feel a liquid going to your brain... Lol
Helmet is misspelled as hemet. Haven't read past that so I'll comment in the rest later.
How did you come up with this story line? Like seriously? It's unique and i love it!!
Read Day 1, and instantly added this my list of must reads...awesome concept, and great writing, can't wait to read the rest!
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