Wow! I love it! Please continue! Idk why, but I picture scarlette johansen being young Alice :-)
...and it would be worth breaking up the chapters into separate files. It makes it easier for people to read, vote and comment...
may want to run it through a spell checker for some small errors. 'Thought' instead of Though' but it is really cool! :)
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