It's so sad what's happening to the mom. I hate the smell of burnt hair too , It's good so far a bit sad but good
Aw I love Mila, she is kind of bittersweet, strong yet fragile at the same time, that's really great that you were able to create a character like that (:
Wow, this is interesting! I love how much she cares about her family <3 I didn't find any mistakes so that's AWESOME!!! <3 Voted! XD :) <3 -Leigh
Wow! She sure loves her family :') I really like the name Mila! xD Great work, keep it up!
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