The Unwanted
They are known as the unwanted children of this land named Tarios. For the city to remain in peace these children must never see the light of day. So out of fear they are placed underground, hidden from the eyes of their families. But when a young boy named Terrance finds a way to escape this horrible prison he realizes that it is not the families who have abandoned him and his fellows to a life of darkness, but it is their leader, the one who dears to call himself the White Lion.
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Wickedfrost328
very interesting hook and good short cliffhangers that leave the reader wondering what's going to happen and wanting more. Besides some grammar errors, good.
WOW.....this is really good...... I can't wait till tomorrow when I get to finish the rest of it........ lol couldn't resist reading the first page ^_^
wow this sounds like a good read... but its after 2am so I have to go to bed :'( I'll read it tomorrow though!!!!! :D
very good! kinda disturbing, but good! you should decide whether this is written in past- or present-tense, though, and stick with whichever you choose.
this is abosolutly amazing to read. I just love the way you have written this story just absolutly amazing. just breath taking
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