I see a black and white forties flick here, the language, the atmosphere. Very cool story, my friend. Here's lookin' at you, kid. Voted.
Wow. This hit me like a rock. It was really enjoyable. You've definitely earned a vote and a fan.
Delightfully vivid and real descriptions.
Wonderfully quirky (in the best way possible).
And alas, I have run out of adjectives.
grotesque characters and bizarre atmosphere. Very interesting. I enjoyed reading this.
wonderful wit , smoky atmosphere out of a Bogart movie and the playful twist at the end. well played. enjoyed the read. ~)K
This was really good! Witty and right on, could practically smell the cigar smoke Also, thanks for voting.
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