Dames, they know what you tell em' to know, you know? In this tongue-in-cheek noire short, a dame knows a man who knows a dame...you get the idea.
I saw the whole thing in black and white...an old movie...
A very well written piece.
Great story! I've been wanting to read some Chandler stories, now you've got me really wanting to find them. It's not easy to fall into that old lingo, and you did it well. And the ending was unexpected, very funny. vtd
This story really got me going. In turn, I got a kick out of the bowery boy lingo and was appalled at the chauvanistic language. The ending had me chortling. Cool story, Steven. vtd.
Struck me as a glimpse into an interesting, off beat character that you could expand on in other stories
Know What You Know...love the story! I believe the slang is 1950s? Great stuff!
This had me smiling at times and toots -love it ;) lol wasn't expecting the end though. Don't think I'd let my boy treat me disrespectfully