That was gawjuss, just amazing, well fine. You'll grow up to be a successful poet in the future :D
You are truly a great writer,the message you just displayed is one that most really needed. great work indeed.
Very cool prose dude. What a sensitive guy you are! My poetry is always so dark. And I like the way you told a story. You have inspired me to try that. Thanks.
this is truly incredibe!! you have an amazing talent, i actually took something from this poem and i am honored to have read it.
I first thought that this was a princess or something and than I heard her use sexy and I'm like yeah nope!
awesome story and i loved how it rhymed perfectly and still made perfect sense. i really enjoyed this. not too sophisticated, not too simple. fantastic job.
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