The Beautiful Girl

1 Part Story 24.1K Reads 895 Votes
TheUltimateFatMan By TheUltimateFatMan Updated 9 months ago


                    

                    
AngelOfDarkness_X AngelOfDarkness_X 7 months ago
I love this so much, beauty is nothing, it is what's inside that counts, well written Bro!
seasofme seasofme 9 months ago
my grandfather always told me a similar story. he knew what he was talking about. your story is much better told than his. and in rhyme. lovely! :)
MysticWolves MysticWolves 10 months ago
This poetry is phenomenal! I love it and it has real meaning. It truly is beautiful
AngelOfDarkness_X AngelOfDarkness_X a year ago
Hear! Hear! this poem is so good, You my friend have a natural talent, You should publish your works. I want to hold your poem in my hand while reading it. Keep on trucking!
LMFAOxBLONDIE LMFAOxBLONDIE a year ago
This is going to be stuck in my head for days...like the lyrics of an old love song :D xoxoxo
PrincessYuuki9 PrincessYuuki9 2 years ago
OH.

MY.

GOSH.


THIS一

OH MY GOSH.


I WILL FOREVER LOVE THIS.