I love this so much, beauty is nothing, it is what's inside that counts, well written Bro!
my grandfather always told me a similar story. he knew what he was talking about. your story is much better told than his. and in rhyme. lovely! :)
This poetry is phenomenal! I love it and it has real meaning. It truly is beautiful
This is going to be stuck in my head for days...like the lyrics of an old love song :D xoxoxo
That was gawjuss, just amazing, well fine. You'll grow up to be a successful poet in the future :D
You are truly a great writer,the message you just displayed is one that most really needed. great work indeed.
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