Ever experienced betrayal from a friend?
very emotional and touching :) i love the use of rhyme and i love how you made me want to read more and more :) Bravo and a great job!
we all hate liars!
check out mine and tell me what you think about it!
What you say here in true
This I totally understand
if ever you need anything
just reach out your hand
I will be there for you
to stand by your side
as a friend that's new
so please don't hide
great job! ;D
Thebbie! I love this! :> Kahit di man ako makarelate! Kailan mo to ginawa? Nung geom? hahahaha :))
This poem is really true. You can hear, from your words, the feeling of being betrayed. Thing is though, I think you should check your grammar but you only have a few mistakes which is good :)
I don't usually read poems but I dont regret reading yours. It's kinda nice :)