very emotional and touching :) i love the use of rhyme and i love how you made me want to read more and more :) Bravo and a great job!
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Thebbie! I love this! :> Kahit di man ako makarelate! Kailan mo to ginawa? Nung geom? hahahaha :))
@smurfette_thnrkcmp It does not change the quality of your writing it just irks me to see those errors which is why I pointed them out, haha.
This is written very well you have a lot of potential. However, I see a few grammar/puncuation errors and the spacing between each stanza is excessive. Voted.
this it amazing, it was like wow. This can totally be a song you knoe that ? ;) LOVED IT
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