Really good start and I'll definitely continue to read :) The story is really captivating and has a interesting plot! :)
Thirds person's POV! *.* I don't write one and YOU'RE SO GOOD AT IT. Good work :D Voted~
Great story you stuck to the age and it was interesting the entire time i couldnt take my eyes of the screen good job keep it up
This is really captivating, I love how you use the old time language perfectly and i also love the obvious bond between the boys :)
this had me captivated the entire time i read it! wonderful description. this was an amazing start to what i'm sure will be a great story! keep it up!
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