wow!!! u r honestly me favorite author here!!! ive read everyone of ur books!!! my first was thread!!!
I loved this! It's amazing how you introduce your stories in a way that captures the reader's attention to the end. I'd buy your books! :)
That was great - you've got a real talent for creating the feel of a place. Nice action descriptions too.
I love this first chapter. As soon as I started reading it I couldn't stop. Looking forward to chapter 2.
Absolutely amazing!!!! I thought it only sounded okay at first but this chapter showed me I was wrong and that its great!!! <3
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