A good beginning. Your writing flows nicely, and it sounds like an interesting storyline. I'll be reading on! Voted :)
OMG. This is like, so similar to what happened to me!! D; And the boy's name was the same too. WOW freaky. I didn't slap though lol. Well done, I love it :D
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| Name | Bex |
| Location | England |
| Birthday | Mar 24 |
| Member Since | Feb 26, 2011 |
| Votes Received | 1,333 |