Torturing THE PEOPLE to death. I hate it when i press the post button by accident
Just found another one, at the first paragraph you misspelt kingdom without the G
the third paragraph from the bottom of the first page @JustineDy It say Yheir breath just change it to their
needs fixing. Just read through the 4th and edit it. I accidently pressed post...reason for the split comment
This story idea is so amazing and creative :) I absolutely love it. the prologue has such intense details. Great job :)
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| Name | TrickyCard |
| Location | Philippines |
| Member Since | Oct 08, 2011 |
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