I love Desiree. That's so awful that her parents are just staying, but that could be fun.
I like this. And I really liked your description. To be honest, some of it seemed a teensy bit cliche, but you carried it off in a cute humourous way. Voted!
Haha I love your title! It reflects the humor and quirkiness of the story. Keep writing!
It draws your attention in from the very first paragraph.
I really love this so far :D
This is really good. You caught my attention in the beginning. I don't see any spelling or grammar mistakes l. Overall it's really good *voted* :)
its good n stuff. but some of it confuses me because she just met him and started calling him.
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