Batteries Not Included - Original
***This is an earlier draft. Another has been posted***
Melanie has a pretty freaky life. She lives with her gay older brother and his boyfriend. Her parents fight so much they should join WWE. Her best friend has the friendliness of a blank piece of paper. Now, her eye patch wearing ex-boyfriend is back, with some unknown motives and seems to want to rock Melanie's world again. And it looks like he brought along his giggly and pregnant girlfriend. Also, who is this really sweet, but kinda clueless, guy that pretty much just dropped out of the sky? What is that thing on his arm and what's up with his eyes? And what does the world's biggest medical company and an ex scientist have to do with him?
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ShatteredMind
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Wow! Freaaaaaaky! But good freaky! Nice! I'm starting to rethink on my thoughts of sci-fi stories! It's really interesting and captivating! i like it!
good job one this put more detail into the character like how they said it not just he said she said you know but other than that fantastic job :)
The paragraphs are quite long but so far, this is really interesting! :D You write really well! Keep it up! :))
Great prologue, very hooking and mysterious. I love the whole experimental stuff, can't wait to read the real story!
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