wow your very good im becoming a fan please check out my poems and maybe become a fan also
thought i'd check out this to.
just like ur story its epic - tension
but it doesnt feel like poem more a speech
@AimAim HA, bout jerk LMAO!
U luv being called LILY!
yeh i will, watch out it will be better than urs darling lool
i'll message u wen i do :D
Very Mysterious, cliff hanging.
Very interesting, cant wait for a new upload
on it, message me when you do?
Very well writing.
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