yeap honestly i had to use dictionary to understand certain words. nice effort. well deserved. I like reading poems. go through my story' wrong number'
A feast of vivid vocabulary leading us through this episodic emotive tale>
Gets my vote
@Saint_And_Sinner Hmmmmmmmmmmm. Very well penned Vi. I liked it very much.
Btw serves him right...lol ;-)
An interesting relationship story, and creative progression in this tale...You take us through emotional evolution...I enjoyed the read!
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