The Thespians

1 Part Story 140 Reads 15 Votes
Saint_And_Sinner By Saint_And_Sinner Updated 2 years ago
Just another act of love...
OwensMartin OwensMartin 2 years ago
Well done! Interesting, powerful, and complex, this work just exudes confidence on the authors level, not so much from the narrator (obviously, I'm pretty sure that's intentional) Anyways, my point is, this is awesome!
seasofme seasofme 2 years ago
Some hard work must have gone into this poem with its uneasy architecture. I admire your obvious complicated thought during its construction. It sure echoes the intricacies of certain relationships.
kukkiekat kukkiekat 2 years ago
yeap honestly i had to use dictionary to understand certain words. nice effort. well deserved. I like reading poems. go through my story' wrong number'
grapher grapher 2 years ago
A feast of vivid vocabulary leading us through this episodic emotive tale>
Gets my vote
Destiny_In Destiny_In 2 years ago
@Saint_And_Sinner Hmmmmmmmmmmm. Very well penned Vi. I liked it very much.

Btw serves him right...lol ;-)
Amuse-bouche Amuse-bouche 2 years ago
An interesting relationship story, and creative progression in this tale...You take us through emotional evolution...I enjoyed the read!