I like the way you've started this story (and the name's are nice and unique) can't wait to read more!
Actually, this is one of your best stories yet. :) Keep using this approach and you'll be getting more readers before you know it.
Up break up the paragraphs. And can u put all your storys togeth cause it hard to find them
I liked it alot!! You can tell ur talented! : ) I will definetly keep following ur story. :D Dnt forget to read and comment on mine :)
Nice! Love it!!! I didn't know Blane was a girl though! I thought she was a guy!!! :P Anywho loved it!!!
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